题目： The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
此图为线和表格的结合。农业用水量一直是最大的，工和家庭依次之；从 1950年开始，工业和家庭用水才有明显增长。表格里仅有的几个数据都要引用，巴西明显比刚果大很多。
The information given by the three-line graph and the table is about the worldwide use of water and how water consumed in two different nations in 2000.
首段 paraphrase原题，概括全表格内容，点明描述对象、地点和时间
According to the line graph, all of the three sectors saw an upward trend during the 10 decades. Exactly, agricultural use was consistently more than others, rising from about 500 m³ in 1900 to 3000 m³ in 2000. Before 1950, industrial water use was similar to domestic one, keeping stable at just under 50 m³. However, during the next five decades, industrial use increased, more sharply than domestic use, to about 1000 m³ in 2000.
（提出整体趋势：10年中工农业和家用水量都有所上升；之后描述一直处于最高位的农业用水的增长；最后比较工业和家庭用水的增长趋势）
As can be clearly seen from the table, Brazil, with 176 million people, had 26,500 ㎡ irrigated land, which was 265 times as much as Democratic Republic of Congo. Water consumption per person hit 359 m³. In contrast, that in Congo was only 8 m³, although there were only 5.2 million people in this nation.
（分别描述巴西和刚果的人口、灌溉土地面积和人均用水量）
In conclusion, in the 20th century, agriculture was the most important sector of global water use. In addition, Brazil’s water consumption was extremely more than Congo's.
（概括全文，点明两张表格的重点）
满分要素剖析：
语言表达
本文的语法结构和用词都比较简单，没有过多的修饰，而以达意为主要目的。
1：The information given by the three-line graph and the table is about the worldwide use of water and how water consumed in two different nations in 2000.
雅思小作文首段统一对原题进行paraphrase. 本句用了词性转换和同义词替换的方法，consume替换consumption, nation替换country.
2：According to the line graph, all of the three sectors saw an upward trend during the 10 decades. Exactly, agricultural use was consistently more than others, rising from about 500 m³ in 1900 to 3000 m³ in 2000.
此处有两个描述上升的短语需要注意：see an upward trend和rise from…to…。描述趋势的时候，要学习运用分词短语，如本处的rising from…很好的避免主语的重复，使句子结构更加紧凑。
3：As can be clearly seen from the table, Brazil, with 176 million people, had 26,500 ㎡irrigated land, which was 265 times as much as Democratic Republic of Congo.
本句中运用从句，对具体数字进行对比。
逻辑结构
本文是典型的总分总结构的小作文。开篇先paraphrase原题，第二段描述线图的宏观和微观特征，第三段引用表格图的每个具体数据。最后一句话对全篇进行了高度概括，点出了全表的重点。